All Comments on 'Filipina Persuasion'

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VanquishedVanquishedover 4 years ago
Wonderful seduction

I really enjoyed the seductive way that Maricar gets to her baby girl. Really like the gentle dominance and foot fetish elements, too. The ending is just adorable.

CharmstylesCharmstylesover 4 years ago
Loved it

I loved the pace of this story. The ending was very exciting. I would love to see a second chapter where she meets Maricar's friends.

liz33ndliz33ndover 4 years ago
so very seductive, and

this is a well written story of passion and rebound lust. I like it a lot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Meh

The story, is pretty good, but the prose, and especially the dialogue read as if written by a 14yo boy.

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