by Billie_Loren
I really enjoyed the seductive way that Maricar gets to her baby girl. Really like the gentle dominance and foot fetish elements, too. The ending is just adorable.
I loved the pace of this story. The ending was very exciting. I would love to see a second chapter where she meets Maricar's friends.
this is a well written story of passion and rebound lust. I like it a lot.
The story, is pretty good, but the prose, and especially the dialogue read as if written by a 14yo boy.