All Comments on 'Fill in Girlfriend: Anal Queen'

I loved it and would like to hear more about these 2. I think that a lot of coaches help young men to become real men. Wish it had happened to me, but I was and am overweight. The coaches I had always had eyes for the well built one, I do not know if they did anything with them, but they were very friendly with some of them.

This story, like its predecessor, was pretty good, but had the potential to be really good with more development and editing. Way too many spelling and grammar mistakes. While I know this isn't a detractor for some, for many it really is. Seamen instead of semen, chocked instead of choked, etc. I'd get an editor to look it over and then submit a revised version.

More please!!

Fucking loved it

I wish I had a coach like that when I was in high school on the football team. I got so hard from your story. Very nice more if you don't mind maybe have another team member join them as well in a spit roast ummmmmm

Erotic

Please do another!!!

Very, very erotic! Good job! Bravo!

What's particularly good about this story is that it is genuine.

The writer did not ponder over commas or grammar. He described his erotic fantasies without thinking twice! Our erotic fantasies consist of images that flow much much faster that our ability to express them with words. Can we express in words everithing we clearly see when we watch Formula 1 car races?

In terms of age, I could easily be the young man's dad if not his grandpa. Yet, i imagined that i am 18 & the coach is lifting my legs over his shoulders, locking our hands & fingers, French kissing me & shoving his cock in my ass. At such a moment i belong only to him. In those moments the rest of the Cosmos temporarily does not exist for me because him & i form a microcosm, a parallel Universe where we injoy in pleasures that we never talk about with our wives & children.

Please write more!

Fucking hot! I love stories like this, probably because I want some big-dicked stud to dress me up as his naughty fucktoy slut and force his dick up my hole until he breaks me. The thought of getting fucked until I cum without touching my cock, and then having my new daddy breed my slutty hole? Ugh I could almost cum just thinking about it.

I need a good gard fucking like that .. then again .. a full gang bang for this cum hungry cock whore ..

good story - a whole lot of typos that should be fixed though.