All Comments on 'Filling In'

Would be great to see father and son fill all of mommy’s holes together, great work hope there is more!

Please continue this story. It is very well put together.

Love it. Wish my wife would be that submissive. More please

Please continue and hope one lady gets pregnant.

This is a fantastic story. I hope there are more chapters forthcoming.

Yes please let have some more

story,MDM! Perfect, just perfect! Loved every word! Lucky Bastards!

Another great story!

I would love to see more chapters such as fully breaking his aunt to be as submissive as her sister and then a family orgy that dad and son DP both women!

Just when I thought it couldn't get better...

Fine as is, but further adventures welcome.

I REALLY enjoyed your story but you ended it too soon! I hope that there will be additional chapters. Maybe a mom, auntie, son (Master) threesome? Dad can watch until he is fully healthy.

Please don’t wait too long to write and submit future chapters.

We need more. Very well written.

Please say you are thinking of continuing this story! It's so amazing. I would love to see more.!

hope you add more to this story!!!

Please please continue this story. It's very well written and organized. And please continue the Trophy Wife series.

Wow. 5 stars

Please keep this story going . Looking forward to more !!!!!!

This story needs to continue. And as usual, you never disappoint.

Good story line keep going

Would love read more.

And to see his aunt wearing his collar in time

Collar me please Sir.

Good fun read, I’m hoping for a part 2

you just keep cranking out the masterpieces. keep it up.

Another awesome story from MDM! So fucking hot! Five stars and a favorite point!

Amazing, loved it from the beginning. Your story is truly a well written masterpiece! There was no rush and a great amount of respect for all characters. I honestly hope you will eventually make this story into a series or at least add on a wee bit more.

Let me start by saying I am a huge fan of this author. But I have to be honest, I know I read this story before; whether it is just like this story or the same story I am not certain but similarities are the same to almost being word for word. Just putting it out there. Regardless 3 stars; some errors I couldn’t overlook for even I would have caught them and I don’t write nearly as good as MountainDewMan.

Hoping for more chapters.

Great story so far! Would love for you to write more of this story line!I love it!!!

Hot Damn.....

Excellent story, as usual! I hope to see more in this story.

Simply amazing period end of sentence.

MDM is the MVP of lit so far in 2020. He has been absolutely killing it

Yes and no. If it's just scenes of the four fucking, face it, that's not really much of a story. Now, detailing how he and Melanie navigate their new relationship -- How open is it? How many people know they are aunt and nephew? Are his grandparents still alive? -- yeah, you definitely have a story.

As others said, you are killing it! We need another chapter, please!

I stopped reading further when he called her sylvia instead of mom

Tell us more about Aunt Melanie becoming nephew Tom's sub. He now owns here.

Great story. best one I've read in a long time. Keep it going.

normally this is not my thing but i just had to keep on reading.

that was perfectly told in my opinion. as of the first read right now. I cannot find any flaws in it.

the thought itself "giving away" the wife is odd. being the mom is odd. but it somehow the further the story went it made sense.

would've loved if you would've extended the adventures of Rick figuring out being a dom with his mom. meaning more scenes. (in the box weren't just the handcuffs, dildo and stroker weren't there?) that would've been very interesting him learn it by doing it also a little input from her (the mom) from time to time?

From how you told it, he read about it and somehow was instantly a natural at it.

I'd love reading another chapter of Aunt Melanie and Rick developing and going further in their relationship.

You started well enough, with I think a possibility for a continuation of it.

loved the entire story and how you told it. 5* Stars

It was a nice read but you left it hanging, hope there is a second part as of telling about the aunts training and how Tom goes to college to find a mate are does he train his aunt to be his mate. Just saying are asking for ( as a famous guys use to say "the rest of the story " ).

I agree with some other comments. Definitely a cliffhanger, but my heavens was it an exciting read!!!!!

This really needs continuing. Fun and erotic read. Keep them coming

The story was very well told and the ending was as it should have been so when I read the comments that it should be continued, I have to wonder if they're too weak minded to use their own imaginations. If they need to read more, just read the story again and again and again and again. Sooner or later, that should satisfy them.

Me? I gave what you wrote and the way you ended it the five stars it deserves. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Now pardon me while I go fuck Mom or one of my sisters.

Raging erection throughout THANK YOU . An outstanding story and a true fitting ending

Excellent. Well told and not much extra background. Very good telling of the sons fears and coping with what he had to do for his parents. Thank you for a really nice tale.

Excellent concept to begin with, sympathetic character development creating extra interest and relatability. That said, there were a few 'clangers' , easily fixed.

No self-respecting toy wrangler leaves 'flakes of crusted white' uncleaned for two months.

Women have borne children, not born them.

Your mom waits on him, not 'waist on him'.

A 'footpad' is a horseless highway robber.

'Every fiver and nerve' a 'fiver' is a five-pound note.

May your stars increase with some easy edits,

mi

I don't normally read "Submissive" Stories. Most of the ones I started to read I only got to about the 3rd Paragraph and moved on. This one however was done in such a way that I could feel the love. The ending was excellent. My imagination is running rampant.

great story

I'd like to see a sequel

Please

Please

Please

Get an Editor

It really disrupts the flow of the story you one comes across such blatant errors as maughamy_issues has listed

(2/6/2022) Excellent! One of the best short stories I've read on this site or any other site for that matter. Don't sweat the request for an editor. There weren't that many hiccups and didn't take anything away from the story, IMO. No less than five stars.

Great balance between domineering & submission.

Done well.

Bill S.

Damn, what a story! Wish it had a second part.

Ok that was a wonderful story.

Einfoch nur super GEIL BITTE BITTE einen 2ten Teil

Hawt und Sweet!

11/10 Fuzzy Handcuffs!!!!!

Wish I could give you more than 5 stars!

That was a tremendous story. Full of love for family and treating a woman as SHE wanted it. No coercion, no intimidation, just flat out showing love for a person as they felt they needed it. Great ending as well. One of the best stories I have ever read on Literotica.

Nice story, I like it. AAAAA+++++

Excellent pacing. I liked the character development being mixed in with the story and the ending was perfect. More story past where you ended it would have just detracted from the life change that had just occurred for the son, sometimes less is more. I have only given out a few five star ratings but this one is definitely deserving. Well done!

Loved the story and how it ended. But would be nice to have a follow-up on how it progressed for the son and aunt and how the aunt and mother got along after the aunt submission.

Wow. Not sure how I stumbled over this story, but... It takes a lot to make me tolerate a story with "cuckolding" (especially of a good man, and a relative to boot), much less enjoy it. Still less *really* enjoy it. But making me love it enough to favorite it without a second thought? Holy crap. That's never happened. I may have a couple stories with adultery in them in my faves (can't say for sure, so won't deny it) but I guarantee I had doubts about them. Not this. This was actually almost beautiful. Bizzare, but beautiful. The Aunt thing should've felt awkward and forced (and I did notice it and think it was a little too convenient) but it really doesn't. It fits. Awesome story, easy 5*.

What a shame you didn’t continue on with this story. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Great story.!!!!! Built I want no need to know what he does with his aunt. I think she might be a good little slut for him. Well how about you surprise us with a clntinuation?

"Filling In:" - The "Tags" info needs to be updated, i.e. Anal, Coercion, Bondage.

Sorry, but once this devolved into a Dom/Sub story I quit reading. Just not my bag . . . .