by HeyAll
Loved the story, but the next episode after a deep peneteating fuck back at the hotel must surely concern the video viewing by her husband who will obviously realise that their son his wife's favourite. I would love to read how they all enjoy each other together and understand the future rules!
Very well done. Now that's a vacation and a dream come true only thing left would be a few more pages of Mom and Son back in the privacy of the hotel fucking each other with animalistic abandon. Love this immensely.
Shorter stories don't usually give the reader a good idea of the character's personalities, but this one achieved that and offered a glimpse into their minds.
If I had one suggestion, it would be to simply remove the line, "Evelyn gulped. "It's okay, but it would have been nice if you asked permission first,"' after Chris cums. It just seems like it doesn't fit the tone of the rest of the story.
Despite that, I gave the story five stars, something that is rare for me to do, and hardly happens at all with short stories. I'm glad I read this and am looking forward to exploring more of your stories.
I loved the story! Gave it 5 stars. Chris had no idea what he was in for when he agreed to do this photo shoot. But he came through like a pro making him mom cum all over his cock and filling her pussy with his cum. Evelyn was surprised with the lesbian encounter during the session and was very turned on by it as well. A nice follow-up to the story is Chris and Evelyn going back to the hotel room and chat about the experience and end up fucking for hours together. Really enjoyed the story!!!
extremely erotic theme...
...I wish this cud b a slowly build, more detailed n longer story... please write moreeee
thanks so much !!!!
Good Lord that was good....think I will go take mommy right now and make her cum......wow....
I like this story very very much.
I have known such a photografer years back, but with a german name, and he was damn good too.
Kind regards
vonLassen
You are one of the best authors on this site.
I am sure many of the readers will love it if you could write longer stories too. Please do try.
Fun and well written. Now mom needs to teach him to sample cream pie.
Love between Mother and Son was fantastic.
I wish we had more.
Hope you have another episode between Mother and Son showing more of the beautiful and true love between a Mother and Son.
Thank you for another great story. I only wish it was longer!
In my opinion, you are one of the best authors on the site. I drop everything to read your new work when it posts. Thank you, and please keep it up!
Talking her son into it, and dad ok!! with it. This was a little!! bit of HEY ALL MAGIC, you make reading fun for an old man like me. .....As always a great read THANKS. ps.5+*****
You must continue when they get back home. Mom, Dad, Chris and Mr. Woo
with Huan filiming as it was so wonderful for Mr. Woo as well :)
A little different from the usual run-of-the-mill stories, and a fun read. Nice one, even if a bit short and fast.
Good story. I liked how you described them getting carried away by the moment and peer pressure.
A refreshing change from the usual mom son story. I enjoyed reading this
What a wonderful twist on the Mother-Son story!
Loved it!
As always, thanks for reading. I hope you've enjoyed this.
heyall