All Comments on 'Finally'

A very interesting first story. As an older reader cyber romance has some interesting differences compared to physical dating and the risks of a first "meeting". I appreacite your contribution and look forward to more from your perspective.

Such a gift for hot, HOT dialogue as well as description. Beautifully balanced. More, please!!

There were some punctuation issues that put me off but mostly -- why did they have to be married? It never seemed to figure in to the story. It was just mentioned then dropped.

There is only one thing missing from this. He should have went down on her. I give you 5 stars because reading at work I will not be able to leave my desk till my jeans dry. Need that to break the stress level. Funny thing is that I may be in her shoes before to long and if it turns out like that I will be smiling for at least a week.