All Comments on 'Finally'

This was just...amazingly beautiful. I wanted it to so badly keep going, to see a happy ending. But in reality, I know that this is exactly what would happen. You are such a great writer and I encourage you to write more.

Looks like you're going to add another "H" to your collection. Good and hot, and your characters are well-drawn. Of course, you've got technical faults in some places that you get right in other places in your story. Quibbles follow via "Send Feedback". But you know the technicals, so just read your story one more time before clicking "Submit".

Thanks for sharing your talent. Hot and plotted, sexy and emotional and real. Hope you keep creating.

that is pretty much life in a nutt shell ... was my best friend , loved her uncondistionaly , still do .. but i was a play thing , before she got married .. nice aye .. great story .. keep writting

Well written. Love the style.

Sadly most sad endings - no matter how good - never quite reach the 5 stars.... and still ...5 stars from me.

As A Bi male I have always envious females because they can have many orgasms over & over where as men are usually one & DONE LOL

Just a lovely story with a sad end, well worth 5*