All Comments on 'Finally'

wow - no comments in years, and suddenly two in 3 hours? Be still my heart! And of course, rereading a long forgotten story - Damn, I needed a good editor, didn't I? Now I might have to edit and resubmit as I can't stand seeing so many errors.

Thanks All - from Alexxis through IC and Anna - for the comments and feedback

so erotic

Very erotic

Wow!

Yet again you please with your wonderful writing

Thank you

Nice work. Seems familiar in theme. I love it. Your very good.

as well as Morals an Good Sense. TK U MLJ LV NV

This is something different altogether. Well-handled, restrained and sexy as hell. Well Done! And thank you.

What the Hell was that?

Are you crazy?

Jesus Christ, I just pulled my panties down to my ankles, hit the button for page two and...it's over. It can't be over. I'm not done. Now what?

You have two arms (lol) and hands (lol), don't you? Get over here and finish what I started. How dare you leave me so sexually aroused.

Will there be a chapter 2?

A bus token is a lot cheaper than a hotel room! Great start to what is likely to be series of sextastic stories. Love the exhibitionism. Hot!