by SexyDaemon
You need and an editor. You can't have first and third person grammar in the same sentence.
Thanks for the input. I'll take that into consideration when someone comments who doesn't have spelling errors in the title of their comment :P
Was really good, but was kind of confusing when the student constantly changed from 'her', 'she' to 'your', 'you'. But the story was great regardless!
Yeah, I fudged up some pronouns, but glad you liked it :)