All Comments on 'Finals Week'

by SexyDaemon

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Very nice story just a wee bit short how's about a follow on

jb1702jb1702about 8 years ago

Mmmmmm my pussy is so wet

SexyDaemonSexyDaemonover 9 years agoAuthor
Nice Response

Yeah, I fudged up some pronouns, but glad you liked it :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Nice

Was really good, but was kind of confusing when the student constantly changed from 'her', 'she' to 'your', 'you'. But the story was great regardless!

SexyDaemonSexyDaemonover 9 years agoAuthor
Response to Anon about Editing

Thanks for the input. I'll take that into consideration when someone comments who doesn't have spelling errors in the title of their comment :P

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
not bsd ptemise, but....

You need and an editor. You can't have first and third person grammar in the same sentence.

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