Find a Demon, Find a Love

Good story, but a little short.

The Ninth Gate, upon which I assume your tale was borrowed, was a very interesting movie, and your ending was just as confusing as the movie's. Regardless, I enjoyed both. 4 stars.

So, the story is not ended neatly. Such is life. I liked it! It was definitely fun and original and enjoyable!

I would have expected the demon to be delighted to not be given a boring "like everyone" request. If I was in his place, I'd be bored to tears with how un-original the list of desirable females is to a random dude.

Interesting, if ultimately unsatisfying ending. The fact that it feels like a cliff-hanger is as intriguing as the story itself. I wish the author's comment wasn't there, leaving the reader (in this case, me) to ponder whether there would be more, and what that more might be.

Fascinating.

THANKS

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The near-ending was predictable. As for the ending itself, it had all the impact of a tablespoon of lukewarm plain oatmeal. And since when does a story end with a comma?

Good one! Didn't get the ending though....

Hey all, thanks for reading. It might seem incomplete, but the whole story was told as it stands. I do have other ideas for if I want to make a series out of it with interrelated characters, but not a multi chapter story. that’s why there are some loose ends that don’t seem tied up. I have too much other unfinished stuff to wrap up right now.

Would've given it a 5,but the ending feels incomplete

Started laughing at 'quim' as it felt like I was stuck in a 70's porn script.