All Comments on 'Find the Shoe on the Other Foot Ch. 03'

by Mesmeri

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Extremely well written, please add more

I really liked how here, unlike many MC stories, the controller wasn't sadistic in the least, and could even be viewed as a hero rather than a villain. I would really like to see more from this series, and hope you will add it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Indeed somewhat hypocritical...

Very well written, but I see a huge incongruity between his stated intention ("true equality", no loss of identity) and his actions - it doesn't look like the unjust Amazonan society will be replaced by anything significantly better.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
nooo

Evil cliffhanger! Evil! hahaha. Nice story though, you merge SF and MC genres well in a way which avoids being stale unlike so many other stories. Good writing.

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