All Comments on 'Finding a Home'

by Beloved_Bird

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Scoobydoo2014Scoobydoo2014almost 9 years ago
Nice

Nice story but Very fast paced, would have liked to see it develop more, find out what is wrong with Amy, more about Brendan and his character, how the relationship develops,me hat happens after college, etc...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
A good story but..

you really raced through it. Would've been nice to see some development in the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Awesome story but......

Way too fast! Would have loved to see it developed. Now its too late.

canndcanndalmost 9 years ago
sweet but

I agree that it would have been nice to see the guys developed more as characters. Take us along on the dates, have them talk on the phone and let us get to know them. for a short it was a nice HEA story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Way too rushed

Nice story line, good couple but totally lacking in character development. Also having Eric who is a self described twink become the top was rather not believable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

DULL

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