All Comments on 'Finding a Replacement'

Short and sweet. There’s good potential for follow-up chapters....

Excellect story!

Well told and very hot. 5 stars and a fav!

MORE!

Brilliant , exciting.

There must be more to this tale of lovely lust. I hope!!

Intensely hot and relatively believable - more to come? What's relationship between the siblings moving forward? Great work! 5+*

Keep them Cumming, 🎼she cried more, more, more🎼! Great Submission

Loved it. If her tits had been bigger, it would have been perfect for me. My mom had big tits so I've been spoiled. lol Five stars and a favorite point!

Pretty damn hot. As always nice story and good writing.

Very enjoyable & super sexy! Please continue the story!!

Hot! Hot! Hot!! One very minor point. Daughter is 19 still in high school? I had finished 2 full years of college and was still 19. Just saying.

another gay story...

Though I have read many stories on this and other sites, I am still amazed at the detailed and sensuous description from a female POV written by a male author. I doff my hat to you on an excellent rendition of a mater and sub with believable detail and no outrageous scenarios. Bravo

Very erotic! Some of the best descriptive sex scenes I have read.

Hot!

But you need an editor!

You needed an editor for this particular story.

Most of your work is well written and fun to read

Wonderful story. Really loved it. You have the ability to convey the love, the romance and really hot sex.

Thank you!!

Others have commented about an editor. It wouldn't hurt :-)

A thought for you: What is their future? You now have a very dependent Sub with her children as her Masters. Is this going to be their future or do the children end up eventually getting their own lives and their own lovers/Subs? Where does that leave the mom? They can't just abandon her.

Frankly, I would love to see where this goes.

Like BlueEyd2, I agree that an editor couldn't hurt. However, that said, I'm a real stickler when it comes to grammatic and spelling accuracy. I only noticed a place or two where I felt a need for corrections of any kind. The story was riveting, and while erotic and erection producing, it was not lewd or trashy (which I sometimes enjoy, too). Yes, sequels would be great! Lots of possibilities.

Fucking great hot story, wish I could have been her son who could have both his mother and sister at his beck and call.

(8/31/2021) This was interesting. Now while Ruth is her mistress; will Marcus be the master of both? I may need to move on to another author for a while before I get spoiled. 5 stars

Like the story a lot .AAAA++++

Well you lost me as reader for this story with 1 simple word master that is completely disrespecting women regardless of what they may say a woman wants to be respected and treating her like a slave is not respectful there is a difference between being submissive and a slave the 2 words master and submissive never should be in the same place in time being a submissive has nothing to do with the word master and I'm only assuming she replaces her husband with her son and if that is the case the mom should always be in control of that relationship

Are there gentle masters?

Very enjoyable. Would have liked the question card game to have gone through more questions - How many lovers did Ruth have? Had Ruth ever done anal? Had Ruth ever had sex with multiple partners? (gives mom an opportunity to reveal participation in gangbangs) Needed a question to reveal that Mom had reserved anal for her husband.

I agree with others. A sequel could certainly be supported. Perhaps another question card game to reveal more about Marcus. Did dad tell Marcus about mom's submissiveness? Does Marcus have any other lovers? What is Marcus' sexual experience level?

Thank for a fun read.

Why stop there. There’s soooo much more you can do with this story. I’ve also noticed it with a few of your other stories too. They seem so incomplete.