by Ropetease
This story has a good balance. Please continue. I would like to see them move forward.
This was wonderful. I liked the way the female character was done...that she was strong in her 'every day' life. Can't wait for the next chapter!
wow :) so good, love the build up and the pace of the story. characters are real and i want to know more, please please continue!
to be followed soon with their first session. Yes?
Well done. Thank you.
This is one of the best I've read. Strong well developed characters, cant wait for part 2....
from your favorite lil submissive
very rushed. Good story line but too fast...No build up or anything. :(
Of course he knows....how does she think her "Master" found out where she lived to leave the note on her door?
i've only given 5's maybe 4 times in 6 years but for that i would have given more