All Comments on 'Finding Home Ch. 06-07'

I hope you continue the story. It has caught me and I think you will build a serious following if you keep writing. Great so far.

Keep it going. Doing good. Maybe different POV maybe....just a thought

Your scores tell the story. You're new here and your writing is already being scored as high or higher than authors that are well known and have been writing a long time. Please continue.

Saw that coming a mile away.

I hope there's no first person POV to come, this third-person with omniscient narrator focusing on Lucy works well.