All Comments on 'Finding Home Pt. 03'

I sure hope there's more!

This is a great, realistic, fantastic reading story. I hope the next part is coming soon!

5* nowhere near enough. Love the series. Hope more to come. It reads "real". Sensational.

Great story. I’m really enjoying it, but I’m a bit concerned…

So just like that Eden is kicked to the curb, forgotten and ignored. He was concerned about her for what? 30 seconds? He professed she meant something to him, but as soon as she turns her back it’s as if she never existed. Is Andy really so shallow?

I see a comment saying this is a great realistic series below mine, I’m really enjoying it but I think realistic is a really long stretch, thanks for you work

Just a not for chapter one (that's where I'm at, but couldn't comment there) most military personnel don't call it "mess" anymore, or the "mess hall". That's a bit of a dated terminology. It's usually called the DFAC, or deefack. (Dining Facility) If it can be acronymd, it will be! It's usually older guys who use mess/chow hall. But then, he was raised by one of those old guys, so...I guess it's not that odd. But it surprised me, so I felt like mentioning it. *Shrug*

Wait...(chapter one) how does she know his truck is a stick shift?

well this one got the wqater works going so far am really likeing your writting skills solid five

Don't keep reading, Andy becomes a cuck

Good stuff- There’s some gaps in plot lines at times, but well written and always leaves me wanting to know what’s next. 5* for now.

I love your stories.

Recognize there needs to be drama etc......... But Ellen was absolutely wrong and advised wrongly for withholding her engagement. Doesn't matter regarding Andy's condition they could have walked this in long before 3 months occurred and to think they were going to do it at a surprise evening meal that day????? Come on that is wrong on so many levels. If they would have in this story waited until that evening meal think what would have taken place????? Major faux pas by this story. Integrity, Integriy, Integrity and not just Christopher...... we are talking about his sister!!!!!!!! Yes I understand this is all make believe. But this is stupid make believe on so many levels. Inexcusable by all of the family to hide this..............

Too confusing to read with the nicknames and jumping all over the place with their feelings. In less than 72h he declares his love and wishes to spend the rest of his life to two different women. Way too much to be romantic, maybe science fiction