All Comments on 'Finding Home Pt. 07'

The fabulous story continues. Kudo's. Love the story and your character development. 5*+++

Again! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Just gets better as it goes. Thanks

Keep it up...... walking wet dreams meet badass...kids will be gods

Loving it!!! Not criticizing, but I got confused. It’s hard for me to fathom that all of the events from start to finish all happened in less than one week.

Still, it’s a wonderful story. I look forward to a continuation.

Great story, well written. Keep writing!

Still loving this story but some of the narrative and plot lines in this chapter have started to create a distraction from the main story arc. I also am struggling with his family’s quick embracing of all the characters. I’m does feed the fire to spur the story on, but at the price of credibility. 4* this time.

semi trash. page 1 shows 3 ? different names or nicknames for Andy, rather stupid. Typical Hero, Ex-military or Cia/Fbi, above average cock or some other fantastic ability.

You dropped the ball here with this chapter. You brought politics into your story, it has no place here. Keep it for your mates, leave your readers out of biased opinions, they aren’t facts.

You went from 5/5 to 2/5 in a flash. Let’s see if you can save yourself from political inanity.