All Comments on 'Finding Ivy Ch. 02'

However, there are a number of spelling mistakes and grammatical errors which whilst a bit annoying don't detract too much from the actual story line. I gave both chapters 3 stars I would have given more but for those errors. Having said all that please continue, I think I can guess where this may be heading but I'd still like to see you finish it.

I love futa, and I love nice and slow transformations. Get an editor, and keep up the good work. Don't be afraid to write longer, or go back and reread what you wrote. It may add on to your story.