by lexin
so-so story not good not bad but it seems you left out something if the step brother was after her what will keep him from going after amy now it's fine for him to help kristen but someone needs to help amy to the setp brother and parents need to be put in jail
Good story. Time to sort out step brother and get Amy out of there.
John.
I thought it was a good tale and would like to see you continue it. Thanks for your submission.
Nice read and good feel. The author has a style he's working up and he could use some polish with spelling and punctuation, Still, it's a hot read ('course I like Daddy daughter stories almost as much as I love brother-sister stories). Keep 'em coming....
waste of time no incest and no finish plus another kid still in danger all equals A TOTAL WASTE OF TIME. DELETE AND EITHER DO IT PROPERLY OR STOP WRITING.
no incest = FAIL
no taboo = FAIL
no end = FAIL
still one child in danger = FAIL
seems you are a total FAILURE as a writer.
Very good story. Please finish it. They need to save Amy and destroy that foster family. Then Kristen, Amy and Max live happily ever after as a family.
.......I don't suppose we're going to get a part 2 after all this time - are we ?
And that's a shame..........