All Comments on 'Finding Krissy'

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unclemerv77unclemerv778 months ago

Good story but, you must be dead or this would have been finished years ago

Rapier875Rapier875almost 7 years ago
As you wrote this over 7 years ago. ....

.......I don't suppose we're going to get a part 2 after all this time - are we ?

And that's a shame..........

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
More storie....

Need more story..... what happens with Amy?

lemonheadslemonheadsabout 9 years ago

Very good story. Please finish it. They need to save Amy and destroy that foster family. Then Kristen, Amy and Max live happily ever after as a family.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
got to agree

no incest = FAIL

no taboo = FAIL

no end = FAIL

still one child in danger = FAIL

seems you are a total FAILURE as a writer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
NO INCEST

waste of time no incest and no finish plus another kid still in danger all equals A TOTAL WASTE OF TIME. DELETE AND EITHER DO IT PROPERLY OR STOP WRITING.

jthardyjthardyabout 13 years ago
Amy

You need to save Amy and put that family in jail.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great stuff...like your writing style though your spelling and punctuation could use some polish.

Nice read and good feel. The author has a style he's working up and he could use some polish with spelling and punctuation, Still, it's a hot read ('course I like Daddy daughter stories almost as much as I love brother-sister stories). Keep 'em coming....

Immortalman20Immortalman20over 13 years ago
great story

I would love to see it be continued

oldwayneoldwayneover 14 years ago
I liked it, so far.

I thought it was a good tale and would like to see you continue it. Thanks for your submission.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
More,More......

Good story. Time to sort out step brother and get Amy out of there.

John.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
so-so

so-so story not good not bad but it seems you left out something if the step brother was after her what will keep him from going after amy now it's fine for him to help kristen but someone needs to help amy to the setp brother and parents need to be put in jail

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