All Comments on 'Finding my Luna'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Nice start !!

I can't wait to see what you do with this story !!! Great start so far....

RTR10RTR10over 3 years ago

I love shifter/fated mates stories! Looking forward to chapter 2!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Snout

The wolf's nose is a "snout", not "snot"! Snot, alas, is something quite different!

SlofredSlofredover 3 years ago

An amazing start. Please continue to share your tale with us. 5 stars..

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Keep Going

I like it, keep going.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Loved it! Great start and I cant wait for more!

sweetone66sweetone66over 3 years ago

This story has great potential... I do hope you can reach it. Good start... Good luck!

DoloreseDoloreseover 3 years ago

Can't wait to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Snout.. please god, snout...

its a great story so nothing is worse than getting into it and being told about the alpha licking snot out of his betas nose. gross. lol. Its snout.

Star124Star124over 3 years agoAuthor

Snot...snout

So sorry to everyone who was turned off by this .I just realized that one typo on the wrong word can make a world of a difference....Sorry!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Continue the story

Your story is beautiful. The physical description of Jonathan and Star is excellent. Their relationship shows a lot of promise (along with the sex scenes). I have read a large number of werewolf stories and I think your story is great. Please continue writing as a lot of us are getting impatient

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