by Star124
I can't wait to see what you do with this story !!! Great start so far....
The wolf's nose is a "snout", not "snot"! Snot, alas, is something quite different!
This story has great potential... I do hope you can reach it. Good start... Good luck!
its a great story so nothing is worse than getting into it and being told about the alpha licking snot out of his betas nose. gross. lol. Its snout.
Snot...snout
So sorry to everyone who was turned off by this .I just realized that one typo on the wrong word can make a world of a difference....Sorry!!!!
Your story is beautiful. The physical description of Jonathan and Star is excellent. Their relationship shows a lot of promise (along with the sex scenes). I have read a large number of werewolf stories and I think your story is great. Please continue writing as a lot of us are getting impatient