by tinaneesen
I look forward to your next self-history. This one moves at the right pace and explains personal growth in an exciting way. Having your pic in the bio adds to the closeness too. Enjoy!
Well written, generally, but there one or two continuity edits. The girls erotic story is strong.
When criticising it is always a good idea to be correct with what you write!
Why hide?
This is an amazing story. Beautifully, sensitively and arousingly written. Very realistic...loved it....and I'm as straight as a ruler...x
That could have been written about me, other than I don't have the tits or glasses. Sheer bliss Tina thanks
Loved the story, Tina. In my experience, the feelings are similar to those experienced by many women - and you portrayed them so very well :)
Some of us take advantage of those emotions and others miss out forever. But having them so beautifully recorded in a story like this will undoubtedly encourage other women to allow their needs/fantasies to play themselves out!
Well done :)
I first read this story a good while ago, not long after it first appeared. Inspired by rediscovering Tina's fair writing hand in some of her recent stories, I went back to the beginning, so to speak, and it is as potent a tale of first lust as any I have read! Delicious and delicate in every way. Thank-you, Tina!