by tinaneesen
I first read this story a good while ago, not long after it first appeared. Inspired by rediscovering Tina's fair writing hand in some of her recent stories, I went back to the beginning, so to speak, and it is as potent a tale of first lust as any I have read! Delicious and delicate in every way. Thank-you, Tina!
Loved the story, Tina. In my experience, the feelings are similar to those experienced by many women - and you portrayed them so very well :)
Some of us take advantage of those emotions and others miss out forever. But having them so beautifully recorded in a story like this will undoubtedly encourage other women to allow their needs/fantasies to play themselves out!
Well done :)
That could have been written about me, other than I don't have the tits or glasses. Sheer bliss Tina thanks
This is an amazing story. Beautifully, sensitively and arousingly written. Very realistic...loved it....and I'm as straight as a ruler...x
When criticising it is always a good idea to be correct with what you write!
Why hide?
Well written, generally, but there one or two continuity edits. The girls erotic story is strong.
I look forward to your next self-history. This one moves at the right pace and explains personal growth in an exciting way. Having your pic in the bio adds to the closeness too. Enjoy!