All Comments on 'Finding the Perfect Fit Pt. 04'

Have really enjoyed this series till this chapter. Nothing happen at all. Either it needed to be longer or given us some form of action. I hope you continue but give your readers something worth reading

This is one of the most erotic and sensual stores I have ever read here. The writing keeps me interested. I don't care about the occasional grammar issue, I don't come here to correct English papers. LOL

As for the content, it's amazing. I love her gently guiding him to femininity, with him enjoying it. I don't care for the forced femininity and humiliation stories. Two people taking an amazing journey together as equals and both thoroughly enjoying it is "perfect". Keep up the amazing work. I am on the edge of my seat waiting for more.

Hey, Anonymous the First, thanks for reading and yeah, this chapter is quite a bit lighter than I would have liked. Pulling back the curtain and revealing my process, I'm current working on part 10 and editing previous parts as needed. I knew this chapter was short and wanted to beef it up some but work decided to try and kill me so I had no time or energy to get this in shape. I wonder if I should have called it Part 3.5?

In any case, I will try to make sure each update has more to it, time permitting. And the next part is pending now and has action, yes indeed! I hope you stick around for that.

And Anonymous the Second, I'm glad your enjoying my writing! It is a challenge writing this from a female perspective rather than from Jamie's but that's what makes it fun. And there's plenty more to be had, so I hope future updates are to your liking! Thanks for reading!