by LushinLace
Like the start a lot. It was when it got to how the girl really liked the guy that I had mixed feelings. If the goal was to have your audience get turned on, I personally would have kept it a random hook up. The audio was well done though.
Lol I genuinely can't tell whether I like the humor or the sexy more here. I think the humor outshines it just a tad as, especially at the end, your frustration had me in stitches. All in all a very entertaining audio and a great addition to your amazing work.