All Comments on 'Finishing School Ch. 02'

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niggaplz101niggaplz1015 months ago

I love Kelsi and Jonathan so much. You made Lily compelling, but I’m always biased towards the mother son couples. Please continue the cuckolding aspect it’s so hot

Mikeforge7101959Mikeforge71019595 months ago

I enjoyed the story. As a suggestion for a part 3 have Lily join Jonathan and his mom in bed, and learn more about sex from them. Maybe have the two women get it on as well. Just a thought.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

EXCEPTIONALLY FANTASTIC!

I didn't think you could top part 1 of Finishing School, but you exceeded my expectations with the incestuous Borden Family. Especially when hot Mom Kelsi cosplayed as his virtual girlfriend Yuki for Dad exhibitionist showing after their private" Graduation Party, after her motivational milf photos got Johnon the Dean lists.

Can't wait for the illustrated version of Finishing School, thanks for the update on that one It's definitively worth the wait. And part 2 of Finishing School coming up right after.

What I want in the part 3 of Finishing School series is Brent finally getting into the Reclaiming aspect of the Family cuckold bonding with Kelsei after part show was over and then have Kelsei having an actual "true Hot wife "experience with husband best friend Thomas and a potential father son DP Kelsei Sandwich next time. Considering John doesn't count since he's her son on his father's cuckold fantasy but fulfills role of stunt cock or Bull regardless of family ties.

I don't on Author how going deal with Lilly or turning into a family foursome is possible to finding out about their incestuous secret after they graduation party. and her mixed reactions traumatized psyche dealing with the sordid secret.

Guess we'll how the next confrontation goes with between Kelsei, Lilly, Brent, Johanthan in Finishing School

It sure to be an erotic, epic sexy gathering at the meantime,

Ha-ha!

My best speculations' guesses.

Continue on

Cheers!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Love the story, move momma and dad cuck to Purdue, son gets mom whenever they want and gf with cuck dad wants to watch them make incest babies every year of college until they get married and mom watches them breed but dads not allowed to watch.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Make it a long story, nylons sex, but make it more to wear Jonathan picks school closer to mom and Lily ultimately decides she can’t compete with mom, make it so Brent resents Jonathan but Mom gives Brent the ultimatum that her and zjonatgan will fuck.. bring motels into it, dinners alone, mom and Jonathan, but a lot of nude nylons. Have the birth control fail and Jonathan impregnated her.. but have more missionary sex.. a lot more of JUST Jonathan and his mom..

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

You need to keep this story going past chapter 3. Make Brent’s cuckolding REALLY backfire on him. I mean make it so Kelsi and Jonathan are fucking behind Brent’s back, he comes home and hears the bed incessantly slamming into the wall, he legs up, runs in her pantyhose, sweat pouring. Make is so Jonathan chooses to attend school at the school Lily isn’t attending, she breaks up with him, but Kelsi ends up going to Jonathan’s school ALone fucking his brains out. Kelsi ends up moving to wear Jonathan is, leaves Brent and the birth control fails. Make it so Kelsi uses Brent’s desires as blackmail to keep his mouth shut. Have dates, motels, the lakefront home, etc as the areas of their debauchery, but plz don’t end this with 3 chapters.. it’s too good wow

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Have Lily confront Kelsi and Jonathan and tell him he has to pick between her and his mother. Jonathan chooses a school nearest his mom. Mom goes every weekend to be with Jonathan, gets them a 1br apartment off campus. Brent learns of this, realizes his fetish has gone awry and he’s forced to accept this new permanent relationship with Jonathan and Kelsi. Keep the hosiery but have mom wear pantyhose too, not just garters and thigh highs. Bring in hotels and dinner dates behind Brent’s back, and maybe Brent and or Lily walk in with Jonathan ploughing Kelsi missionary with her legs pointing upward and her heels on his shoulders. The birth control fails Kelsi at one point and at 43/44 is pregnant again. Keep this going longer than 3 chapters please. You still can do more with this mom and son .. please

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Hotter than a forge.****

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Great story line, love the characters.

Lily confides with her mom of what she saw that night at the cabin. Mom explains why it could happen with a mother and child. The special bond that would form. She explains that his love for his mother is always going to be deeper than anything she could provide. But the Jonathan would always love you deeply. Them lily's mom confesses her love for lily and lily's finds out she is bi. She than goes and confronts Jonathan and his mother. Fathers are left out of anything between Jonathan and lily. And you could and the mothers getting together in a later chapter or Jonathan's mom and lily's dad as he has a real man's dick 9+?

Thanks for the storys

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Lily needs to fuck both of them maybe even bert get involved this time

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Bravo my friend that's amazing great story line kept me on the edge all the way. I don't care what comes next I know it will great. It was more like reading a novel then just a short story which is what I like. Can hardly wait until the next chapter

PH4R40HPH4R40H5 months ago

I love the ideas others have mentioned already, dates and college visits from Kelsi. The cherry on top for me is Johnathan taking over the master bedroom on school breaks, leaving Brent to sleep elsewhere. Just more humiliation in general. Lily is a nice touch but I don’t want to see her involved with Kurt and Kelsi

tallman441tallman4415 months ago

Excellent story. Here is where I think it should go. No particular order

a) Lily confronts Jonathon & Kelsi and asks her for lessons to please her son. Jonathon decides to go Purdue. Lily accepts his relationship and joins in with both.

b) Kelsi trains Brent to be a full fledged cuckold. He can watch any time he wants but must clean up her creampie.

She also makes it clear that Jonathon owns her pussy and can have it whenever & whereever he desires.

VincepetroneVincepetrone4 months ago

Seems as though Lily is headed to becoming a cuckquean.

DrbrichyDrbrichy4 months ago

I was hoping Brent was going to have a heart attack and die while getting exactly what he wanted, so our intrepid couple could marshal onward into the future together without his wormy ass hanging around, fucking everything up. Alas, you let him live. Please kill him off in the next chapter.

Jonboy12345678910Jonboy123456789102 months ago

When will the next chapter be out?

AshRynn87AshRynn872 months agoAuthor

Part 3 will not probably not be ready in 2024. I only write a few stories per year, and right now I'm working on adding to a few of the other series and a one off story. I had spent a lot of effort trying to get the illustrated versions approved, but it seems that those will not be happening, unfortunately.

I've started outlining Finishing School part 3, and I really like the direction it is headed. I think it will be a very hot story, but I don't think I'll get to writing it in earnest until the end of 2024.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

damnmedamnmeabout 1 month ago

To me, Cockold stories are best when the sons wins, and when are all parties involved gets what they want and are happy by it.

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