All Comments on 'Finn Ch. 06: Wait'

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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Another cracking chapter. Anyone into domme and moulding a male sub need to read this.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Liked it. Not criticizing of the story at all, just an interesting question. Is the process she's putting him through strictly ethical? She's basically changing his personality, and simultaneously addicting him to her and bdsm in general. He technically consented, but she didnt disclose to him the full effects of her conditioning, which as an experience dominatrix she well knew. Very well written story.

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