All Comments on 'Finn Ch. 10: Predator'

Utterly great series ... please keep the chapters coming!

Please everyone comment.

1. Is Mistress Morgan's second chance with Finn, herself, or both?

2. The word chance signifies opportunity with risk. What do you think she will risk? What will be put up to risk for her? For what?

I think this is the Mistresses 2nd chance with her heart and soul. Sounds like she has been emotional hurt before and she hasn't grieved the hurt and therefore is guarded.

I think that the Mistress will risk her heart for Finn. For Finn the risk is his friends and family seeing him as less than. He would need to shed his life and become a different person forever.

I’m reading this whole series and this scene is one of the hottest love making scenes I have ever read. Great work.

I liked this chapter the best so far. Great story. You really got me good with your great writing. The whole series is fraught with peril. At least to me. Thanks for writing this!

This whole series is so stunning. I'd love an "alternate universe" version without any of the bdsm stuff, just their incredible chemistry. Vanilla romance is my fetish, lol. But I do like her dominance but when she turns on the tenderness, it's great. Stellar writing.

OMG!! This is an incredible series, up there with the best of literotica! What a chapter & final scene......wow!