All Comments on 'Finn Family'

Great story, thank you.

It didn't really work for me. I couldn't understand their relationship and most of the time I was taking pity on Ryan because of the constant teasing he was suffering. Sorry, but it didn't push the right buttons for me.

Well written, and damn enjoyable, although a bit slow at times. Still a 5 stars rate.

Great story… I wouldn’t have known it was three different ones melded together unless you had said… bravo

Great story and with children born and on the way, it opens the door for a second generation story if you wanted to take it there

I enjoyed your story very much. But I think that Megan and Ryan should have gotten married it would have looked better for her parents but other than that I thought you were writing style was good and I enjoyed the story I just wish it was longer

very well done loved it

fantastic story line loved it...

Well done. How did Megan's parents take the news

Nice story. I loved it. Can’t help but wonder what is wrong with the sibling’s father and Megan’s father. Both are at least verbally abusive, and one is physically abusive. Love the incestuous relationships.

I really liked the story until the author decided Ryan should have sex with his mother. You lost me at that point. 2 stars.

Not much real incest for the length of the story. He only ever fucked Nicole once and not sure about his mother as it occured so late in the story. Well written but a bit short on substance as an incest story.

Remember "cis" ladies, it takes two lesbians to take one "cis" male off the market. hehe 😋😋

Holy shit. I have never read a story this good. The description of their love and their feeling was amazing. PLEASE, continue writing

It's extremely rare that an author can actually finish one of these harem type of story the right way 5/5.

I had to laugh as soon as I read the part about the girls having sex just after he shot his load into the girlfriend. and knew that his sister would be the one ending up knocked up and not the girlfriend, I knew his cum would have leaked into his sister's pussy when the two girls was rubbing their pussies together. it came to mind when I remembered about a 10-year-old girl that got knocked up from swimming in a pool that some boys had cum in and the girl was a virgin for sure. the story was a good read.

Simply wonderful!

Absolutely splendid story.

Well written.

So glad mum got her rocks off.

It was okay, but I couldn't help feeling the two girls took advantage of Ryan. He contributed by far the most financially to their household, and he willingly went celibate for years to maintain the fake relationship with Megan. What was he getting out of this arrangement, that he couldn't have gotten from a regular girlfriend?

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At the very least, the two girls should've been thanking him with regular blowjobs. When he started getting twitchy from not getting laid, this should've quickly escalated to him sleeping with them both. The two girls were bisexual rather than strictly being lesbians, so it was a logical progression.

Also accidental pregnancies aren't very exciting. This would've been way hotter if he was deliberately trying to knock up his sister... with her eager consent of course.

I wish you would have brought back the ex gf just to see how she would've handled seeing him so well off and how she blew it

Very hot! Five stars and a favorite point!

Might add a tag about lesbian sex.

Neat idea but the execution of some of these interactions is kind of fantastical. Some interactions need more realism.

Great story. I liked it. 5stars

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An extremely well written story, with the added bit of hilarity that Nicole technically was knocked up by Megan!

Great short story. Really enjoyed the read.

This story was lovely. Quite romantic. The sex was loving and hot. I have a fetish for safe anal play and lactation. There are ways Karen could train and encourage her milk to come in, so she could wet-nurse her grandchildren (and her children again). See? A fetish! I want Megan and Nicole to marry, with Ryan and Karen acting as Best Man and Maid of Honor.

Then, I would like Ryan and his mother to commit in a religious ceremony as well.

Megan’s parents got forgotten. I do not expect them

To be included the families sex play. But they deserve to know their daughter’s truth.

Do Nicole and Megan play with strap-on toys? What if Karen asked Megan to take her ass, while her sin was buried deep in her pussy?

I hate the idea of James just disappearing into the sunset. Life is harder and stupider than that.

I would love a sequel where Megan gets pregnant. Although I imagine (fantasize) Karen’s breasts getting lager as they fill with milk to feed her family, I believe she is too old to safely get pregnant.

Thank you for this delightful story. I will check out your others. And I hope for a sequel.

wish I could the same thing

Sweet, kind, consensual, with strong male and female (pl.) leads. I think you wrapped it up before the epilogue, but I am NOT going to complain. We need more stories like this in the literotica world.

A great story, loved it. AAAAAA++++++

Well done!

My favorite incest stories are the ones that end romantically and I always root for that.

This was one of the best stories I've read on this site. Note 1000!

Very much enjoyed this, well done!

I stopped at the “getting pregnant from scissoring part”. Couldn’t stop shaking my head in disbelief that you actually wrote that.

Your an incredible writer, thank you for your time and work, YOUR AWESOME, ty

Enjoyed the story, well done!

Fantastic story. Thanks for sharing.

To quote Goodshoes2, well written, and damn enjoyable. A 5 stars rate.

Really, really enjoyed this story. Hope you have more !!!!

Wasn’t all that much a fan of the mom’s inclusion, but this was good nonetheless.