All Comments on 'Fire and the Redhead'

A bunch of distracting spelling errors, but the one repeated most is "crutch" (what you use if you have a bad leg), which should be "crotch".

A great story, good well, but you could use a proof reader.

Point taken and thanks for the comments. I submitted this story to an editor but never heard back from them. Being from the Antipodes, we do have differences in word meanings. 'Crutch' is what I was brought up with and is a common term. I guess it comes from the farming community where 'Crutching Sheep' is a farming term. I will attempt to find an editor for further parts of this Novella.

Well written. You were extraordinary developing Cindy especially as well as Tim. 5 stars. Enjoyable read. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Are you a professional?

Very well written, great story...but you lost me with the Daddy play. Bad choice.

Point taken and thanks for the feedback. That is why I ask for comments, either negative or positive. They are the only real guide as to what readers think of my stories. Scores are a guide but comments are invaluable to an author.

Cheers Antipod.

TACKY...

And i never saw panties that had a crutch!

Enjoyable read and great character development. “Crutch” is ok by me if a regional idiom. Might want to point it out though when introduced.