All Comments on 'Fire Ch. 03'

loved it! more please...

They don't get any better than this. I'll be watching everyday for the next chapter.

Cant wait for the next chapters to see where they go from here! Thanks for writing this, and i eagerly anticipate more from you!

This is one of those stories that unfolds with time and the more you read it the more you love it. It's one of those pieces were the sex is worth waiting for because you need to know the background first which is why it's one of my favourite works on literotica. Believe me when I type this I've read a lot of stories half of which I give up reading because there same old same old whereas this has varity in it and a good variety of vocabulary and words. Thankyou you for sharing this story with us literotica readers and I hope there's more to come...

smoking HOTT!!! excellent stuff. thanx so much for sharing with us.

Where to start? I loved the way that both Jairus and Thea threw little temper tantrums, all full of frustration. I loved the way she went to him as he was going to her. And, OMG! That was one of the most sensual, blazing lovemaking scenes that I have ever read! Fire? More like scorching hot! If I had been holding this in book form, it would have sizzled! I am trying to cool off, and am wondering why I thought that I was so finished with vampire stories. Because your story, secretme's Mira,and Elianna's Fallen, have given that tired gendre new life. More please.

This is an amazing series.... The buildups are perfect, and the interactions between the characters make them so real I'm waiting for them to come in through my front door... I'm definitely looking forward to the rest of this series!

What a chapter! Looking forward to more!

I loved the build up and the tension along with the explosion. I think that I'm drooling.

This chapter was the BEST! And really, it is REALLY ok, if this is the last of the story, it is completely well rounded and damn, SUPER HOT!

Terrific and definitely a Favorite!

Now THAT is what I call a satisfying sex scene! I need to go find my boyfriend......

I have been checking. Every. Single. Day. to see if there was an update. Finally! And its several pages long! Its perfect! I absolutely loved it! It was well worth the wait. So passionate! That got me totally wet. Please keep the long chapters coming! I can't wait.

I love this story so wonderful... your a great writer i can't wait for more from you..

... one of the best sex scenes I ever read on Literotica. And I've been around for over 3 years now... Smoking hot, lots of detail, tension, passion...

Keep bringing on the good stuff!

x

...the most erotic thing I have ever read... amazing!

Wonderful story. The anticipation and build up was terrible and wonderfully arousing and kept me glued to the story till the end. Job very well done!

The story is wonderful and i'm really enjoying it!

Can't wait for some more!

HOT! HOT! HOT! Great chapter--I can't wait for the next one.

holly fuck! that was awesome. OMG, that was hot! I love how you've written the whole story so far. I loved how he turned into this beast, how the way she makes him feel made him lose all control. But at the same time it was kinda sweet. Gosh, fabulous writting, please post the next one quickly!!!

That was ridiculously off the chain Eni! I am breathless, speechless, in awe! Anxious for the next chapter. Great, great work!

It was dirty! It was rough! Fuck! It was fucking raunchy dirty hot read! Bloody excellent read! MORE!!! ;p

Absolutely amazing, thats all I have to say. I keep checking back for the next chapter, and the wait is killing me!! You write so beautifully, and not to mention extremly hot!

Absolutely amazing, thats all I have to say. I keep checking back for the next chapter, and the wait is killing me!! You write so beautifully, and not to mention extremly hot!

I love your writing style... I love your characters... The sex is sizzling hot!!! Don't stop writing :)

next chapter please

I absolutely love it!! The sex is seriously hot and the story's fantastic too. Very impressed so far.

Love this story, wonderful job! That was so hot, wow

When I sat down to read, I was cold. I'm sure as hell not cold anymore...

That aside though, you write beautifully. And you have created a wonderful character in your vampire. The way you express his possessiveness, well, just everything in general--wow.

You are a rare find...Bravo!!

AMAZING.... where do I find sex like that!?

Seriously, this story is one of brilliance...delayed gratification really does have its benefits and your work is a first class example.

Two very enthusiastic thumbs up, now I need to hurry along and finish the other chapters ; D

How can this story not rate at the top of the voting category. This story is the most amazing hot sexiest character developed story ever written on this site. Its what Charlaine Harris could include in her southern vampire series to make them perfect for me, and they are darn near perfect as they are, just like yours.

I agree with everything the last poster wrote, you're story is absolutely amazing please continue it

Wish I had found you a long time ago. And I thought Danielle was the best....

That was the best literotica story I've read so far!!! Loved it, loved it, loved it!

that was so hot... you are an AMAZING writer. WOW. 10 stars out of 5.

Good god...that was some intense lovin' and I'm lovin' it! Great work!

Vampire sex at its best.

One of my favorites.

One of the best sex-scenes so far of what I have read at literotica! I would surely like some myself.. Groan..

and it's always soooo good

...reading that has only increased my annoyance at the fact i'm not getting any!

my fiancee is away... sigh.

seriously, this is a fantastic chapter, and i'm glad you waiting long enough for it not to be stupid, but short enough for us to not get bored.

keep it up, i want to see more writing from you!

k_k

Hi!

Great job! Great sex ! I wish those Amazon writers had your talent!

Thanks!

How can I ever be satisfied with meager subsistence of half heartened endeavours of fumbling passion.

I want to THRIVE!

I will have to reread and practice... practice to feel, live as well as you have written here.

Thank you for reminding me that living... not just existing takes effort. I will relearn to exert all the effort I can, until I exist no more.

Thank you for aharing your work! This is one of the best chapters/stories on this site

Did I say this was hot? It doesn't begin to describe how sexy hot this chapter was!

This is sooooooo good, I've come for seconds! So deliciously hot!!!! One of the many great literary works here that is worth re-reading again and again and again. Thank you!

Thanks

So fucking good.