by magmaman
Holy shit if there ever was a story that begged for, no demanded, a follow up it is this one. No author should ever leave his/her readers hanging like that. They have an all consuming fire to to know what the characters did further.
more-so for their loved ones on shore. TK U MLJ LV NV
Is She the village cockpit? Wow shock and awe factor yes! Anyway Love you all! Bye. Greg.
If she was that gun ho to get something and/or some relationship, then she should of said something and not hooked up with someone new.
not all men are silver tongued or able to talk shit just to get in a womans nickers...he was respectful to her until that other cock waving jerk showed up...glad he hooked up with her in the end....finished all to soon...needed to be expanded a bit more...nice one though
Some of us men are some thick - we just never think we are good enough -
Then there are the gold plated assholes who think they are too good and they are mostly piles of crap heh
And yet the species survives - so far.
Nice one
I agree it's too abrupt but I hit that darn submit button instead of review again while I was still working on it.
Oh well, maybe I will write a second chapter.
Thanks,
MGM
The only thing I didn't like was the abrupt ending. Thanks for the post.