All Comments on 'Firecracker'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Beautiful story!

When Tess sees the naked Calvin, does he have a healthy spray of chest hair for that sexy man chest? It would give her breast something to gently caress when she touches his chest, and something for her to lick as she licks HIS chest as he does hers. They see a good couple and I hope you write more about them. Give them more scenes like this, and make her ogle his hairy chest and abs. THAT is a sexy sight on a young man!

And what a reward for the girl who was bullied in high school! The other girls should be envious of her, as Tess got a real gem of a man with Calvin!

linnearlinnearabout 3 years ago
I Want More

This just left me wanting more of them being together.

KingCuddleKingCuddleabout 3 years ago

She chose well.

Got what she wanted...and built on it happily!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Amazing! A story told without typos and with good grammar. Wow!

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