All Comments on 'First Anal Fuck, And in the Family'

Great story, I gave it five stars but you need an editor. Don't take that as criticism, you are a much better writer than me but there were so many English errors that other people may not give you five stars. The story deserves the highest rating, just need to have an anal retentive reader with OCD like me fix the errors. Can't wait to read all your stories.

I just loved your story. You words painted some very erotic pictures, arousing to say the least. I'm off to you next story.

I quit when she woke up and found her self basically sexually assaulted and saw nothing wrong with it.i don't care how much of a slut she is having strange men jerk off on you when you are asleep is not a way to have a good time since it could have gone much worse than a jerk off session.

Gave five stars as it was definitely a turn on. A few grammatical errors that interrupted the flow but looking forward to more.

Crying Uncle x 2 .

I wish we knew which uncle was Jean’s brother. A small point, but wow! What a hot slut!!! :)

So hot!

Somehow I feel there will never be a fight in Anna's family. Nastiness yes, but only the best kind.

Inaccurate quote from Oscar Wilde: sex, consumed in sufficient quantity, can lead to a certain state of happiness.

Loved it - 5 stars from me!