All Comments on 'First and Second and More Loves'

Hot story. I hope you post another chapter SOON!Please.

Good story Poly, It got me stroking midway thru page 2.

"palpated her pudendum."

AND

"Her other hand was working a contrapuntal rhythm..."

COME ON. This is LITEROTICA, not Saturday Night Live.

Finally someone with a vocbulary, knows how to spelland has more than a smattering of grammar. Don't pay any attention to anonymouses comment- they probably didn't comprehend and got defensive.

I just know there is more and better to come. Nice story, a loving touch to the sex, and, as the Chinese menu says "Happy Family"!

5*. A few errors. Also, it's hard for me to believe a virgin knows so much about foreplay - oral sex, etc. Seems to me beginners would start simpler and then progress. Of course if you are following the same script as everyone else, then you need to go in that order. Still I liked it.

What a way to start the weekend for me.

it is great,love the story keep em cumming.