by beaugueste
I thoroughly enjoyed this story. It was well written, fast paced and sexy. Looking forward to reading your other submissions. 5 stars all the way.
I enjoyed your story. Your writing and mechanics are superb. I have not read a story that used so many different words to describe a pussy. :) The sex was hot, and I could almost feel it as I pictured myself being fucked like that.
Very fast paced and nicely slutty! You are my kinda girl, lil red! 5 stars!
I'll admit, I woulda liked a little stronger build into the action, but otherwise this was really well written and the sex was hot! It wasn't over done and I liked how easy to read and follow it was. Too often on Lit I get lost and confused with what's going on during sex scenes image-wise. Thanks again.
That was very nice, very easy to follow as others have mentioned
T'was very kinky, loved it