All Comments on 'First Contact'

I really enjoyed the concept of this story. Would have liked it to go on a little longer. Overall, loved it!

One of the more wholesome takes on the propagation-of-the-species premise, and making the aliens shapeshifters solves most of the inevitable compatibility questions. Would also have liked the denouement extended to better round out the arc: honestly, the whole setting seems a prime candidate for a series, and with a more conventional romantic lead-in vs an emergency hookup under duress, this would make a solid novelette.

Kudos for not handwaving cervical penetration the way a lot of futa fetish stories do. I'm not sure where the mind control factors in, but there seem to be hints that Tines is not wholly human herself...

This was an amazing story. I never read anything like this before.

5-stars.

Intriguing, clever and wonderfully erotic. The premise/scenario is perfect. You could do more with your two heroines or keep sharing other pieces of a very vivid imagination. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️