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So no one needs to read it. Then try to put some emotion or feelings into the writing. This read like a laundry list. Then try to write something at least halfway original or clever. This scenario has been done to death. And at least write about things you have some knowledge about. Had the idiot "mistress" caned her that hard she would have been bleeding so badly that she would have needed immediate emergency surgery to stitch up the gashes on her skin. Canes can be brutal tools of torture. The way you described the beatings, she would have been brutalized, bloody and unconscious. A truly awful story of stupidity and violence.