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Anonymousover 5 years agoTypos
5*. There are some typos. The one that jumped out was "duck"tape instead of duct tape.
Admiralbird348over 5 years agoTypos? The hell with that
This story I love the best. I really want Matthew to be the hero and rescue Lily, whom I dearly love:) I imagine Ian is in cahoots with Lucas. He wants her as his own and would kill Matthew in a heartbeat, Ha, as well. As always, thank you for writing for us. I really appreciate your fine work:)
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