All Comments on 'First Discovery Ch. 03'

more more more more more more more longer more longer longer more more

this story is brilliant cant wait for the next chapter please make it longer

For the next part I absolutely love this story it's my favorite

MORE !!! best story ive read in a long time

Now I need to go back and read the first two chapters!

keep going.

...try working with one of Lit's volunteer editors!

There's a good story here, desperately trying to get out, but your spelling, grammar and punctuation have it completely stifled. (At least the dialogue was better here than in Chapter Two)

I WANT to rate your chapters higher, but, in their current state, it just isn't possible.