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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
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This could have been really good, but it was just too convoluted. It just ended up a big confusing mess. If you could introduce the relationships a little at a time, it might be really good.

Jedd

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Currently working and have not had a chance to get back and spend the necessary time to write better stories. I write these stories as a creative outlet, writing a story until I run out of ideas where to take the story. I return to stories as inspiration hits and time permits...