All Comments on 'First Hot Evening of the Spring'

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Many_MemoriesMany_Memoriesalmost 9 years ago
OOOPPPSSSSSSS!

It WAS a dream - WASN'T IT?? ! Question is - will she find out in ten minutes or in seven days? Bet it was FUN - either way!

Many_MemoriesMany_Memoriesalmost 9 years ago
adding to that --

I never did find out why my sister was so worried over her punctuation --REALLY? What in "H" "E" "double hockey sticks" is so bad about missing a PERIOD?!?!?! Put in a question mark or an exclamation point!!?!?!?!

JJMemaw0623JJMemaw0623almost 7 years ago

Hot is right! Great short read!?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Not a dream

Because her bra was off

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Amazing

Really exciting and erotic story, with a really hot set up and beautiful attention to details. The ending was just brilliant. Keep up the great work. I will definitely read your other stories.

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Photo_GWPhoto_GWover 6 years ago
Hot

Great story, nicely done

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
I can imagine this happening

She's pulled in very gradually. I always like that.

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