All Comments on 'First Kiss Ch. 03'

Please make him even more dominant- it's so hot!!

I am sure he will want a child.

....whether he wants one or not.

disappointingly, the english is deteriorating. misspellings, apostrophes misplaced in every manner possible. can it be that previous parts had an editor, but this one did not?

Hooked

“ She was hooked, and knew it, but didn't care anymore.” We’re hooked, and know it, but do care. Hot story!