All Comments on 'First Kiss Ch. 03'

Hooked

“ She was hooked, and knew it, but didn't care anymore.” We’re hooked, and know it, but do care. Hot story!

disappointingly, the english is deteriorating. misspellings, apostrophes misplaced in every manner possible. can it be that previous parts had an editor, but this one did not?

....whether he wants one or not.

I am sure he will want a child.

Please make him even more dominant- it's so hot!!