by Satsumabook123
awesome! I enjoyed it all. the description of everything was right on target. I will have to see what all you have on here for sure. Thanks for sharing. 5stars
Pappasleaze!
Loved this situation. I’ve watched my ex dominated by a woman she worked with. Very different to watch and I loved seeing her abuse her. Very aggressive.
Good story, I think you write from experience, the ending seems to be sudden, like you have had enough, try to end as well as you build up, please accept this as constructive criticism, I like your style.