All Comments on 'First Meeting (At The Airport)'

I would like to be Mary right about now! Damn that was sexy!!

Wow! That is the hottest one-page story I've ever found on Lit (I've read many). Also one of the best written and developed. So sad that in the ten years since posting this you haven't followed it up with the rest of their visit. Similar to what Anonymous said about two months ago, I would like to be him right now. So much potential for this story as a series. And I can't understand how the composite score is only 4.23. That's a crime. Thank you so much for this one.

Barry