All Comments on 'First Night of Passion'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Very Engaging Story

A well written story of first love. The passion was well written and you definitely owned the story. In other words, you wrote what you felt, not what you thought others want to read. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Great Opening Scene

This is one of those stories that is more erotic than pornographic. Thank you--beautiful and sexy!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Nice reading

enjoyed the story

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