All Comments on 'First Steps Pt. 01'

by fungirl92

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26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago
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Author, you should make this your last foray into this particular,little link. It’s not especially popular in LW. Anyone, with low or no standards, can write cuck stories, but it seems to be the thing now. You do you, whatever that is.

lovemesomephillylovemesomephillyover 3 years ago

Yeah cuckolding never goes over well here but I wish you the best of luck

GcoachGGcoachGover 3 years ago

Fantastic. Looking quite forward to see the next chapter!!! Very hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I enjoyed your first chapter and I'll be looking out for the next, although I thought that this could stand alone if you didn't want to develop it further as I liked the way you ended it

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

The problem now is that this is just a start next she will want to have a real cock in her and it will only get worse he will soon be locked in a cock cage and will only get to watch time for the divorce papers now not later get out while the getting is good

DRobbie06DRobbie06over 3 years ago
I liked it

I thought it was a good idea that she started with toys and SPH. I’ll look for the next chapter.

ShadowRosieShadowRosieover 3 years ago

She obviously rules the roost and the rooster. You may as well give it up and get out while you still have this little amount of freedom. You'll be caged and spanked next. I'm sorry for you if you aren't man enough to make it on your own. Find a lawyer and get the paperwork started, tell him everything so he won't get surprised when you come back wanting to change the terms so your cheating wife gets more of your assets.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Well and truly done.

Yup! Both meanings. Dave is toast! This story was very well written, grammatically and in plot development.

I found it very erotic and like Dave, I'd never want to face the choices he will, but what a way to go.

5*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
A very good 1st attempt

You did very well for your first attempt into this kink. I think it's a hot topic for couples to fantasize about in the bedroom but once you cross that line and let the cat out of the bag there is no going back to normalcy. Very good start! I look forward to your story as it evolves.

NVDiceGuyNVDiceGuyalmost 3 years ago

Really well written and executed. Sad to see no follow on. .

dingusmcmingusdingusmcmingus12 months ago

Good story, very hot. Shame there hasn't been a part 2.

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