All Comments on 'First Time for Everything'

by HannahRosie23

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Complete cr*p!!

Why do some writers think that trying to make out that the Reader was part of the events in the story makes for a good story??

The Reader KNOWS that he/she was NOT there, and did NOT take part, so therefore the story is completely unbelievable and an utter waste of time for anyone to bother reading it!!

1* - because I can't leave a 'half-star'!!

HannahRosie23HannahRosie23over 10 years agoAuthor
lol

It's called a point of view, anonymous. Thanks though, I appreciate the input!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

I love ur stories..

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