All Comments on 'First Time For Everything'

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Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bc9 months ago

Solid coming of age story but the basic premise would have been better with a different "disease". 4.0*

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Beautiful! So thoughtfully written and well characterised. Congratulations!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

It was a good story up until she started squeezing sperm out of his zits. There was no other type of acne condition you could think of?

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J.B. Carter writers weird/bizarre, romantic/erotic stories, from their home in the backwoods nestled between undulating valleys. Donate or commission a work: https://ko-fi.com/jbcarter Subscribe to newsletter: https://jbcarter.substack.com/ Work can also be found on Amazon.